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This is a reference piece I did of Green Ranger & Dragonzord from Power Rangers.

This is all done in Crayola colored pencils.

This was finished on 4/22/2009.

PROGRESS SCANS

#1: [link]

#2: [link]

#3: [link]

The original artist's name is Travis Earls... his original piece can be found here; [link]

Critiques


:iconfirewater12:
You have some risk in your composition. You were willing to have a worms eye view, which can be challenging. You also show signs of entropy on the Dragonzord, with some scratches on its metallic skin. You also have a complex pose on the Green Ranger although it seems overly used. Your proportions are very accurate and you payed good attention to details. The hand looks very nice as well. One of the big things that can be improved is separating the Dragonzord from the Green Ranger. They blend in with each other. You can make the line more defined or add a stronger shadow on the Dragonzord to separate the two. You can also look into atmospheric perspective. Think of something to help the viewers see them in different layers in space.

Nice work.
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:iconsquidlarkin:
Nice! The detail looks spectacular. :D You did a great job of getting the metal texture down.

I think one thing that made the original piece stand out so much was the contrast brought about by the purple in the background. Your piece might be improved by bringing some of that purple back in.

Another thing that might improve it is if there was a little more contrast in the green parts. Making the dark green parts darker and the light parts lighter. It might also look good if there was some hints of yellow in the lighter green areas and hints of blue in the dark green. Also, if a bit of the colors from the sunset were reflected in the metal, it might add a nice touch.

Honestly, I can't find anything else to give as critique or tips here! Nicely done! :clap:
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:iconart-of-zugzug:
Great job on the colours!

This really brings back memories...

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:iconmrgorzitza:
He was the best of the Six, hands down!

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:icontheajstarr:
No arguments there. :)

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MY BEST WORKS;

VENOM: [link]

POWER RANGERS: [link]

SPIDER-MAN: [link]
:iconyoshiangemon:
MMPR WILL return to the airwaves, remastered. Next year, January, end of the month, and I WILL get all the Zords that make up the UltraZord! And yes, the Legendary Tommy Oliver is one of the greatest, no matter WHAT color he's in (Green, White, Red, and Black).

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:icontheajstarr:
Wow really? Where's the info on this?

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MY BEST WORKS;

VENOM: [link]

POWER RANGERS: [link]

SPIDER-MAN: [link]
:iconyoshiangemon:
I googled it. And it's in other sites.

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:iconda-bacon-master:
awesome pictures the MMPR was the best series out of the whole lot i reckon

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:iconfunkymunkz:
OMG! This is just awesome! My childhood has suddenly come back to me.

I miss the 90's.

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:iconjusticejealousy:
This is probably the greatest thing ever!

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