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Critiques
Nice work.
I think one thing that made the original piece stand out so much was the contrast brought about by the purple in the background. Your piece might be improved by bringing some of that purple back in.
Another thing that might improve it is if there was a little more contrast in the green parts. Making the dark green parts darker and the light parts lighter. It might also look good if there was some hints of yellow in the lighter green areas and hints of blue in the dark green. Also, if a bit of the colors from the sunset were reflected in the metal, it might add a nice touch.
Honestly, I can't find anything else to give as critique or tips here! Nicely done!
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